One of the best learning opportunities in this campaign is to see how my awesome and talented colleagues who are ace marketers re-shape or improve my fundraising messaging.
Take a look at how Nancy improved my original messaging.
I hope she will leave me a comment with a critique that I can use for future reference. There's a lot to learn here. And, of course, I hope we $50,000 for the Sharing Foundation and the children in Cambodian.